tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1300158978263897315.post7926727918337619114..comments2013-03-14T18:32:12.223-07:00Comments on New York Ramblings: Slice of Life challenge: Day Numero UnoElisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16903138994495931746noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1300158978263897315.post-76282830241276905532013-03-02T19:57:07.824-08:002013-03-02T19:57:07.824-08:00Just lovely...the story built so beautifully. The ...Just lovely...the story built so beautifully. The paragraph where you described the boy in stunned silence was especially moving - you really felt the depth of the boy's emotions.Tara @ A Teaching Lifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07195982194362559883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1300158978263897315.post-48259651249975576532013-03-02T18:21:11.076-08:002013-03-02T18:21:11.076-08:00Thanks so much for the feedback, and for reading, ...Thanks so much for the feedback, and for reading, Betsy!Elisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16903138994495931746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1300158978263897315.post-22574164684325174292013-03-02T17:55:20.927-08:002013-03-02T17:55:20.927-08:00This was fascinating and had great imagery. This was fascinating and had great imagery. Betsy Hubbardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10492340502962987362noreply@blogger.com